Strong intro and a powerful conclusion are essential to any paper.
Unfortunately, obvious errors and really poor grammar scupper any interest in reading what's in between. Pls take this as well-intentioned advice.
Admire your bravery for posting to a site with so many critical readers though.
I would have thought it was obvious - We need to be playing in Europe year on year, gaining the experience of fixture congestion, big match pressure and demands on the squad, so when we eventually get our top 4 finish and a crack at the Champions League we don't repeat Everton's massive...
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